I wonder what you could do to add more detail to your blog post and make it really stand out. You included some interesting extra info about South Africa, but make sure that you are using your own words.
I would like to see you add some images to support what you are writing about. - Miss Birtch
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Hi Michael
ReplyDeleteI wonder what you could do to add more detail to your blog post and make it really stand out. You included some interesting extra info about South Africa, but make sure that you are using your own words.
I would like to see you add some images to support what you are writing about.
- Miss Birtch