Dogs are better than cats because all cats do is sit around trying to get pats or just roam the streets which dogs play with you , They want heaps of attention and the are passionate to there owners. They are also really fun to play with because they do all kinds of tricks like jump through stuff like rings and you can also get them to sit down if they are well trained well there are cats that don't obey the rules and they are annoying
The second reason why they are better are because they are protective. If you train them right they will protect you against dangers or other animals . There are really protective breeds of dogs like German Shepherd's , Cane Corso , Doberman's and Neapolitan Mastiff. If you train them right you can tell them when to attack and to move forward .
Great feedback from Ruby!
ReplyDeleteI agree that your point of view was clear and I thought it was effective how you made mention to specific dog breeds. This was really interesting and made your writing memorable.
What I would like you to focus on next time is writing a very strong and interesting introduction to hook us in. You are very literal and your opinion is clear in this opening, but I think you could make it more interesting for your audience.
- Miss Birtch