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Tuesday, 13 November 2018

Moment in time when I was challenged:

There was once a time where I didn't want to do this activity but I just had to get it done with so I was 
confident to do it again . There was once a time where I didn't like so I decided to go surfing, When my mum and dad told me we were going to see my uncle because he is a good surfer . When we got there I seen my uncle and he said happily "have you ever surfed before" and I replied no with a nervous voice then my mum and dad followed up to the shore where he was going to teach me lessons . I was really nervous because I have never done it before so I stepped out of my comfort zone and tried something new . When I seen the board it was the biggest board I've ever seen . It was big and it had a fin at the bottom so I asked him whats that and he said "its a fin it causes you to control your board" so when I got on it he hopped on the back and we surfed out into the ocean we didn't go too deep because of the rip currents . When I started it I wasn't scared then when we got back he said go out yourself now and I was scared because I didn't know how to surf then when I got on it I went like 5 meters into the ocean and then I fell off then my uncle came and collected me from the ocean . It was like  under my feet . I thought I seen a shark so I ran quickly 

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Michael

    You worked hard on this piece of writing today and I like how you challenged yourself with this activity. Great job taking the feedback to add an image.

    Remember where your commas and punctuation go when you are using quotation marks!

    - Miss Birtch

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