Today we had to write a paragraph about how different countries celebrate christmas I choose australia because i've been there multiple times for christmas with my uncles . I still need to do one more country which I will be choosing Jamaica
Monday, 10 December 2018
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Hey Michael.The part that stood out was when you said you go over there to see your uncles. Most people go over there to see there family a couple days later. Its nice to see that you care and have the importance to see your family straight away. I think that is awesome because you don't get to see him that often. Have you thought about making the text a bit bigger because I cant really read it because it is a little bit to small. I also really like how you describe the differences like how you said "it is like a new Zealand summer day". Other then that, that was an awesome blog post cant wait to see your post about Jamaica.
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