When I first seen the spray I thought it was like lynx but it was gel and when I squirted it , It felt like
nothing but you needed to put in a little bit of force for it to spray out . It was like a shaving cream in a
tube like shape and the smell was good like a refresher . When they squirted me it was like everything that I wanted to say just came out and when they were all done I was finished saying what I wanted to so it felt good as soon as everything came out .
I got to say everything so that I was ready for the day ahead of me so I wasn't grumpy for the day I was ready for anything that came my way and I would fight back anything that tried to come at me . Now I feel good because everything that I wanted to say was onto the paper and everyone could see what I was saying about them so everything was off my chest !
Wednesday, 12 September 2018
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Hi Michael,
ReplyDeleteWow! I am a teacher at Yaldhurst School and I have really enjoyed reading your blog post because it got me thinking about the different feelings I have at the start of every day and the different feelings my children might have at the start of every day. I love the way you have suggested the can of spray is like a person with feelings, this is a powerful image for your audience to have. Do you think that some people might feel like that can of spray at times? I wonder if we can do anything to help them feel better? I'm really interested in your thoughts on this and look forward to your reply.
Kind regards
Mrs Taylor :)