For cybersmart we have been doing a dlo this is our dlo about cybersmart
Tuesday, 11 September 2018
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Kia ora Michael. I am very impressed that you chose to use Piktochart to make your DLO. I like that you have stepped outside your comfort zone with Google tools.
ReplyDeleteSome feedback would be to make sure that your points (first, second, third, fourth) are listed in order. Some of them are out of order ex) sixth way then fifth way, which is a little bit confusing for your reader.
Have you ever had your whanau comment on your blog? How about sharing this post with your sister and see if she will leave you a positive, thoughtful or helpful comment!
- Miss Birtch