Michael H
Year 8 Student
180 Waterloo Rd
Christchurch 8042
Dear Mr Mitchell
Year 7 Team Leader
Hornby High School
Christchurch , New Zealand
Dear Mr Mitchell
I am writing this letter to inform you about my opinions about having fitness . I think having fitness is healthy and all but at the same time I have some concerns about having fitness in the morning.
We get real sweaty in the morning then when we get back to the class our sweat stinks out the class and
Mrs Birtch doesn’t like the sweat. Our silliness from fitness comes back into our class and that causes us not
to learn as good as we could. Some people whinge about the cold but I reckon it would be better in the cold
than in the hot weather.
Mrs Birtch doesn’t like the sweat. Our silliness from fitness comes back into our class and that causes us not
to learn as good as we could. Some people whinge about the cold but I reckon it would be better in the cold
than in the hot weather.
The first reason I don’t think we shouldn’t have fitness is because we get all sweaty in the morning then
when we get back to class it smells. Fitness is good but we could reduce the days of fitness to like 2 days a
week. Also Mrs Birtch doesn't like us sweaty in her class for the whole day.
when we get back to class it smells. Fitness is good but we could reduce the days of fitness to like 2 days a
week. Also Mrs Birtch doesn't like us sweaty in her class for the whole day.
The next reason is when we are at fitness some people get silly then that silliness comes back to the class
and that causes us not to do our work. When we are silly in class we can’t learn as good as we could if we
weren’t silly so that’s my second reason why we shouldn't do fitness.
and that causes us not to do our work. When we are silly in class we can’t learn as good as we could if we
weren’t silly so that’s my second reason why we shouldn't do fitness.
The third reason is why some people think the cold is the worst thing about fitness Fitness is better in the
cold than the bot weather. I think fitness in the cold is the best and people over exaggerate over the cold.
cold than the bot weather. I think fitness in the cold is the best and people over exaggerate over the cold.
P.s I like how we have to wear no jackets.
Hope you read my letter and maybe change a few things and shorten the days down.
Yours Sincerely
Michael
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