The next day Heath sees Calvin walking to school so he joins him . They start talking about what happened yesterday and Calvin was tempted to fight Robbie again but Heath was trying to talk him down but it didn't seem to work. When they got to school Robbie was talking about Calvin so Calvin walks over and said " Why are you talking about me " Then Calvin got angry so he punched him in the face .
Then everyone came over to watch the fight then Mr Matthews came over to pull Calvin off him then Heath thinks Calvin is going to get suspended for fighting twice . Heath has had a meeting with Mrs Langi and Heath tells her all about it .
Then she finally believes Heath and then Robbie has finally got suspended so Calvin starts crying of laughter and when he sees Robbie going home he starts laughing and thats the end of the story !s
Wednesday, 25 July 2018
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Kia ora Michael! I really loved reading your creative writing piece and seeing some more blogging from you. Did you enjoy reading this story? I think your ending changes the moral of the story a little bit, but also may be a realistic interpretation of how the boys might have sorted out their issues.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the nice work.
- Miss Birtch