Writing

Christmas holidays , On the 25th of december we went and celebrated our Christmas holidays with our Family. I was waiting for lunch at my house because we were making the yummiest lunch which was a mix between maori and nz culture foods and to celebrate a time with family.

When I woke up I got to open my presents at 5:00 am and I opened my presents and saved the one I didn’t know what it was till last when I opened it my eyes glew up it were some LeBron Soldier 10’s I was so excited because they were red and black and they also had LJ hovered over by a crown which looked cool.

At 10 am we went to my dads Nana’s house to see her and collect our presents and gifts . She normally gives me $300 in vouchers for eb games and $200 in vouchers for warehouse . We stayed there for about 30 minutes until it was time to see my great grandad that was 78 he couldn’t get up and around so we just went over there with my nana and grandad .

When we arrived his too little jack russell’s came running up to us and wanted a pat so I gave him one and he went so crazy he started doing flips and stuff. When we got inside we gave him a hug and sat down at the table. My great grandad always tells jokes so we were prepared to laugh he was telling us about his past and his time owning a circus with lions , monkeys and everything else that was in a circus .

My granddad told me when he was about my age he was driving a truck with a goat tied on the back.

When he started it up he zoomed off and everyone was telling him to stop but he thought they were
saying goodbye until he finally
stopped and saw the dead goat dragging along the concrete and he stopped suddenly to check if it was
alright but it was dead a long time ago , When we heard that we all started laughing.
We left after 20 minutes of jokes . When I got home I went straight to bed at 12:00 pm .

When I woke up at 4:00 I needed to have some late lunch because I was a sleep during lunch later on
all by myself it was 1 hour away from our tea time so I hopped in the pool real quick and done some
bombs after that we had desert .After desert I went home and stayed up till 2 in the morning then went to
sleep ready for boxing day.

Reflection:

I think that I needed to put more thought to my writing

because it isn’t very detailed and to work harder.

I would like to improve my ability to add more interesting words