Taken (Draft)

Saturday 15 July 2016

On a breezy eerie night a human presence made it way into the house. Alesha and her friend were in bed not even a little peak. “SQUEAK” as the man went up the old creaky stairs . The girls woke up and seen a terrifying scene , A man approaching them with a knife “ Ahhhhh” they screamed and ran for their life. When they were running down the stairs the man put a strip of tape across the start of the stairs so they would fall over. “It worked” he said as Alesha tripped up and hit her head on the stairs causing a pool of blood whilst Alesha was knocked out the man suddenly picked her up and took her to his van. She was unconscious for about 2 hours then woke up in this creepy old rustic house in the middle of nowhere strapped to a bed next to all of the victims he has caught. The house all covered in blood , People with masks and chickens rampaging around outside. Her dad Ramsey (Police Hacker) knew that she had been taken so he got a plan together. The plan was to hack the man’s account and find his ip address and track where she is and find out who he is working with and to locate him using them. It might seem a bit complicated but once you read the story it won't be so much complicated  . He had used his skills in the army to find the most dangerous man in iraq and eliminate him . It took several hours to find out who the man was his name was Raul Menendez. When he found out who he was he got angry  because he was the one in iraq that kidnapped and tortured him in the war 10 years ago . He found out exactly where he was and his wife Amanda (Ex veteran) to help him because she had experience in the army