My goals for this writing:
- Put capital letters and full stops
- Use ‘’WOW’’ Words
- Use ‘’WOW’’ Words
- Use Similes
Attempt 1
When i'm blue i get shivers and I feel free., But when i'm red i get feisty and ready to hunt for my prey.When i'm yellow i'm busy as a bizzy buzzy bumble bee.
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Attempt 2
When i'm blue i get shivers and I feel free.,
But when i'm red I get feisty and ready to hunt for my prey.
When i'm yellow i'm busy as a bizzy buzzy bumble bee.
When I want something someone else has I turn green.
When Im by a fire I get orange.
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Attempt 3
When i'm blue I freeze but I have freedom dawning on myself.
But when i'm red [DAMN] you'll never want to mess with me or else…
When i’m yellow, i'm working harder than an army fighting for their country.
Also when I want something I don't get I turn green like the hulk.
When I get burnt I turn orange like a fire.
When im black I feel uncomfortable around the people I have never met.
I get brown when i’m lifting some heavy weights.
But when i’m purple i’m happier than santa delivering presents.
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